SPORTSBAR, NY #1, 8” x 10½”, copied, 36 pgs.

Twenty-eight one-page gag comics, much like a newspaper comic strip. The content is not dissimilar to a webcomic of a similar caliber. I don’t think it’s bad, but there’s something lacking. There are two bunny characters that act as the recurring thematic glue, but their tone and personality don’t seem distinct enough. I recommend that the author go look at some of the greats doing this exact kind of schtick. If I could recommend, I’d say pick up a copy of Matt Groening’s Life in Hell. That’ll do you good. –Gwen Static (Martin Pohl, no address listed)