I just don’t get what’s going on here. It’s all over the place. There’s no track listing (it was just a CD-R in a slip case), so I don’t know song titles, but there were a few that I liked individually, but as a whole, I need more cohesion. Some decent stuff, some I’m not that into. My advice would be to try and work on things as a whole rather than parts. I’m not saying you have to have every song be the same (though it’s obviously worked well for Bad Religion), but just some direction would be nice.
–megan (no address given)